on Monday we went to Motat it was fun! frist we went to the bus and waited for 30 minutes then we went out and went in are groups frist we met a man then he lead us to a spot to eat after that we packed up and left are bags then we went to the class room we had to pick a chormbook at the table then we loged in and edited then we had to go explore we sod heeps of planes and booms then we went to the tram it was kinda fun then we stoped we went to put are bags down then we went to the playing area it was fun then we had to go back to school then we went in the bus and went to school the end.
Hello Losaline,
Thank you for sharing about your trip to Motat, i like how descriptive you were with your writing.
Personally, I believe school trips are exciting. For next time, you might want to check the spelling of words such as chromebook. However this was a great explanation of your Motat trip.
Sincerely,
Helena